Reviews for Forbidden
almostforgottenfairy chapter 4 . 3/27/2009
Yay you updated quickly!

I'm so happy that John's met the shida finally, I'm sure things will progress?

And I absolutely loved the ending of this chapter. It made me giggle :D.
can't be bothered to log in chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
Wow I really like this fic!

It's originanl and I htink you characters have a lot of substance to them, I can't wait to find out more.
Annabelle chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I like the idea of this story, the girl in the story intrigues me and I really want to find out more about her :)
almostforgottenfairy chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
I feel so sorry for the witch-girl at the moment, but thank goodness that one of the villagers has seen the error of her ways!

I quite like how John's behaving with Oliver at the moment, it maes me like his character more.

I really love where this story is going! Update soon please :)!
almostforgottenfairy chapter 2 . 3/25/2009
This is awesome!

I love your charecterisation. Update soon please :)!
wonderstar chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
I really like this story!

It seems diferent and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it :).