Reviews for Forbidden |
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almostforgottenfairy chapter 4 . 3/27/2009 Yay you updated quickly! I'm so happy that John's met the shida finally, I'm sure things will progress? And I absolutely loved the ending of this chapter. It made me giggle :D. |
can't be bothered to log in chapter 3 . 3/27/2009 Wow I really like this fic! It's originanl and I htink you characters have a lot of substance to them, I can't wait to find out more. |
Annabelle chapter 1 . 3/27/2009 I like the idea of this story, the girl in the story intrigues me and I really want to find out more about her :) |
almostforgottenfairy chapter 3 . 3/27/2009 I feel so sorry for the witch-girl at the moment, but thank goodness that one of the villagers has seen the error of her ways! I quite like how John's behaving with Oliver at the moment, it maes me like his character more. I really love where this story is going! Update soon please :)! |
almostforgottenfairy chapter 2 . 3/25/2009 This is awesome! I love your charecterisation. Update soon please :)! |
wonderstar chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 I really like this story! It seems diferent and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it :). |