|Reviews for A Fine Line|
| laternflickeredinmymind chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
oh my goodness, I can see why it's your favorite chapter. I was reading slow to make it last longer. lol. It didn't last long because I wanted to see what happened next.
I wish instead of Sam walking in, it was Dev. I'm sure there would be drama with that.
Please update soon! I love this story.
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
Lovethe story! Haha good chapter!
| ohxrosie chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
This chapter was great. I loved the 'Just okay' scene.
| foreverxlove chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
Eh, I've been so busy I haven't even had time to read this story. So I was just treated to three chapters in a row and all I can say is wow, Garthgarthgarthgarth... is amazing(:
I've never really liked Dev... I personally think that he knows that she might have feelings for him and that compared to Garth, he really is the one in the wrong.
Maybe it's just because he doesn't like Garth and he's the one acting as a barrier between Mer and Garth getting together.
I'm interested to see what's going on between Garth and Dev and how Garth handles this tension between him and Mer.
Hope you're having a good time in the East Coast!(:
| mia5081 chapter 4 . 4/9/2009
First of all: You're going to the east coast? I'm currently chilling in Boston until next Monday when I go back to school in New Orleans. I've missed New England...except for the cold. The cold really sucks.
And second and more importantly: I really like this story. As in, I really, really love it. And I can't wait for you to update again (hopefully soon) because I want to read more!
| mia5081 chapter 3 . 4/9/2009
So...I like Garth even more now. Despite the fact that he sounded so sad at the end of the story. I think it makes me like him even more.
Okay, I'm off to read the next chapter )
| mia5081 chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Oh my God. So I officially love Garth. It's final. He's awesome. And makes my day...continuing onto the next chapter now )
| laternflickeredinmymind chapter 4 . 4/8/2009
Okay,I am now relating to Meredith a bit too much and it's kind of scaring me.
I am seriously in love with this story.
I love the make-out sessions between Meredith and Garth. haha. At you aren't prolonging it and making us wait for it.
I don't like Evan. I hope you are protraying her out to be that way. I know someone in my life who is exactly like that.
I hope you have fun on your trip and please update soon!
| a beginner chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
i totally agree with SexyCinderella and well, u rock...
| SexyCinderella chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
I will skip ten dates or more just for hoking up with Garth. I'm seriously starting to love this guy. But, oh, well, I'm quite sure he already likes Meredith. Such a pity XD
I'm REALLY not liking Evan. Really. Meredith should just tell her and asshole Dev -I dont like him either, if you didnt notice XD- to go to buck a fufallo. If Garth doenst like him, it must be for something, dammit! And talking about that... I'm curious about what happened between them, and what happened between Dev and Sam because I think I'm sure something happened. Maybe it involved Garth and an alien, or something like that XD
Sam seems like the kind of girl anyone would befriedn immediatly, and she's one of my favorite characters at the moment -yeap, I like her more than Garth-. So, more Sam! That's my little request. And updates. And more Meregith/Garth interaction too... But that's that XD
Well, hope you enjoy East Coast!
PS: Oh! About the not-studying thing... I wont study because I'm going to be hanging on to fictionpress to see if you update! Yeah, that seems like it have a little sense XD It was the worst I could think at that moment because studying was what I was supposed to be doing. But I just coulndt NOT ready something you wrote!
| ohxrosie chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
I really liked this chapter. It was cute, made me laugh and defs left me wanting more.
"You can skip the lousy date." - I thought that was really cute, but then felt that maybe I misinterpreted what he said because... well... it's Garth, and then I had to laugh at myself because I was over analyzing the situation
| blondiexoxo chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
hey i really like this story
i hope u update soon
i love their chemistry together.
| SpicyPepper91 chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
Aack! I loved it! And I love Garth-Meredith make-out sessions :D
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| laternflickeredinmymind chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
I loved this chapter. I had the crappiest day ever and reading this made it so much better.
I am so curious to find out what happened between Dev and Garth. I hope it's not cliche like "he stole my girlfriend" or something like that.
I understand how Meredith feels about Dev. I've been there and done that. I don't even know how I got over him but I did.
Maybe she'll fall for Garth and she'll forget about him.
I also feellike a big fallout is going to happen between both Evan and Dev and Meredith.
I'm glad to hear that chapter 4 is done. I can't wait to read it.
| SpicyPepper91 chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
Um, wow. This story's turning out to be amazing. And it's not a surprise either, because your other story turned out to be beyond amazing.
I usually don't like the lanky kind of guys, but for some reason, I'm really liking Garth. Ahh can't wait for your next update!