Reviews for A Fine Line
laternflickeredinmymind chapter 2 . 4/1/2009
I love this story. I can't wait to see what is in store for Meredith and Garth. )

update soon!
skittle-me-street chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Looks great, very promising! Great to see another story by you
SexyCinderella chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
I dont like Evan, at all Just thought you should know.

On the contrary, I REALLY love Sam and Garth. They're cool and funny and great XD

If I was in Meredith case, though, I would have get so mad at Evan I would have probably... I dont know, break something. How could she ditched Mer like that? Sisters before misters, always! Stupid Evan

Oh, well. i'm waiting for the next chapter! Update soon or... or I'll be force to stop studying for my finals and is going to be your fault! XD


treg chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
OH IT SO CUTE! continue, continue!
foreverxlove chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Hey, I just wanted to say that I've adored your stories thus far and this is no exception! I love how unique and original the name Garth is(: If I ever have a son, that is totally going to be what I name him, haha.

The minute I read it, I was like "yep, I can already tell how awesome this story is going to be(:"

The kiss made sense, I mean Mer was good in a sense, but when you read about how she gave her virginity away after two months it's not all that surprising, but did take me a minute to go "woah. that just happened, she just went there" haha

Overall, it was amazing and I can't wait to see if Mer will actually get over Dev or if Evan will find out.

Eagerly waiting for chapter two to be done!.. even though you only posted this a few hours ago haha:]


And one teeny, tiny mistake I saw.. I think that maybe you didn't mean to add in the tell?

“I tell want to hear your story,” he told me.
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