Reviews for A Fine Line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ITs GETTing SO GOD! i so have not lost interest! i do wish this chapter was longer but you did warn me..lol.. and i am glad you posted something.! i can't wait to read what happens next! i feel bad for Meredith.. and i can't stand Evan and i don't really like Dev.. but i love Garth.. Although i was kinda disappointed in the way he left her like that.. but anways! great job and i can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're back! WOT :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I missed this story! I can't believe that Meredith went and had sex with Garth. Well, I can believe it, but not the fact that Dev broke up with Evan. I might be overreacting, but I feeling Dev is now going to cause some problems between Meredith and Garth. And to be completely honest, I'm not even sure which one of them I would want Meredith to end up with if she had to choose. Great chapter and I hope you'll get inspired and update soon ) ~Mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel strangly sorry for Evan... I mean, you could probably tell that was coming, but it still makes me sad... And then she blamed Meredith like it was her fault... Yeah its 8:23 in the morning and I haven't had my coffee yet XD Still digesting things. Otherwise, a great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! Have I already said that? I'll say it again: I LOVE this story. Poor Merideth. Wonder what's going on in Garth's head... and I hope our protagonist has happy things coming... :) Love your writing, your pacing, your dialogue and your natural tone. Can't wait for another update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe love the chapter :D xx Ali |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Its incredibly well written and original (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god. As bad as this sounds... I actually had a crush on my best friend's boyfriend once. Sigh. It's was complicated... I love your story though. I could totally relate to it! More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't like Evan, she's mean. i don't like Dev either, but i think Garth is fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...WOW. I hope you update soon...I really hope someone punches Evan... I usually never enjoy reading stuff like this...usually I gravitate toward supernatural stuff and I must say, I REALLY enjoyed this...and look forward to what happens next. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() yay you updated. how unexpected. haha but good :) only now i want more. you always get to the drama and leave us hanging - we want some closure! lol anyway i'm glad that everything's getting out there, finally. Thank you for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I just started reading this but OH MY GOD, what a cliffhanger! PLEASE update sooner than a few months! summers-end |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my, update now. i hate Evan what a bitch, poor Mer :( update soon i MUST know what happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snap! Evan's not happy! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a bitch! Meredith needs to drop her as soon as humanly possible. I'm liking the story by the way; you write really well! Looking forward to chapter eight... - Ashabagawa |