Once more, I simply adore this story. The characters are well portrayed and developed, (Alis is fucking ADORABLE) as is our protafonist, just in a very prissy way. Alis you want to hug. Kale you want to hold down and kiss to get him to do something /nice/ with his mouth for once...

XD Anyway, I loved this chapter. I noticed a few easily fixed typos (I'm not complaining I swear, because you're a GREAT writer) but I thought I'd offer my services as a beta. I'm quick, I promise. Well, if you're interested, my email is Eliana1618 at live dot com. If not, I will remain an avid reader and reviewer. Keep up the good work!

Nilah

Alis is gonna end up making poor Kale do something drastic. Like murder. But the more Alis shows up, the more I think he's up to something (in addition to trying his best to jump Kale, of course). That conversation about books was very cute :3 See, Kale? Alis is totally meant for you. Accept this and move on. Ah, and he gave in with the book order! Yay! :D Bet Alis is gonna be pleased as punch when he finds out Kale's caving~ Heh. Oh, and I am very excited for Fath'su'un to show up. A brother of Arai'iin's? Well, he must be lots of fun! :D

KALE'S ADORABLE. I love you, this chapter was awesome.

I so like this. I so like this a lot.

People at that school are mean. Like that teacher in Harry Potter that commandeered the school, and declared it a fascist police state. Or something like that.

Kale's (partially) self-imposed exile entertains me.

Library Sex. Just saying.

This is a wonderfully delightful story so far! I'm looking forward to reading the following chapters in the morning!

Keep up the good work! I'll be back!

- Fangbanger

Love it, absolutely

*blinks*

You're not dead. Goody. NOW UPDATE! FINALLY SOME KALE X ALIS ACTION! :D

Thank you so much for updating! I was really happy when I got the alert in my email and I can't wait till the next chapter.

Oh God. It's been forever since I reviewed a story...I didn't even know what button to push for a moment. This site is totally pimped out now.

That statement wasn't entirely pointless, I promise you. What I mean is, it's been a long time since I've read a story that is as review-worthy as this one. I love the main character and hate anyone that doesn't like him. He's original and hilarious, just the way he interacts with people-I love it, he's amazing. Kale's personality is just my type, although I've got to be honest I was expecting the new teacher to he the top in the relationship, not the cute little shy one. Heh, not that I'm too disapointed though, because I adore Alis as well. I want to hug him constantly, because he deserves it for being nice to Kale.

Honestly, the sad part is that this is very true of schools. It's all about politics, my mother is a teacher (and a damn good one) and if you're doing your job correctly people tend to not like you. It makes them look bad, because they aren't. It's very real.

Arai’iin is very intersting, because he likes Kale (seeing a pattern?) and I suspect he will be very important later on...I want Kale to completely pwn every person that every called him a hack in this story and I'm hoping you'll do that...just to shove it in the student's and teacher's pretentious faces. God, things like this are what make people jump off of roofs, and the rest of the school would probably wonder why too, the idiots.

Okay, I'm done ranting. Just telling you, this is an amazing story you have here, and I cannot wait to read more of it. :)

Nilah

Nice story! I actually like Kale quite a bit. He's amusing, and, well, he's just cute, even if (because) he can be a jerk sometimes. Yeah..well, keep up the great work! :D

This is a great story so far, keep it up! I hate it when authors just abandon great stories. I can't wait for Kale to find out whats going on with Alis and the lightning!

I really like this story. It's kind of quirky and not too much of anything, which is nice.

) Mandraco.

By the end of this chapter I had the picture of Arai'iin sat in a tree cackling madly, Alis sat in a corner hitting himself with a book saying "stupid! stupid! stupid!" and Kale making sure that all the books on a shelf were in line with each other OCD style. Not sure why, but with each chapter I like Kale more.

Somewhere, you wrote "Kale felt much human". Was there supposed to be a 'more' in there somewhere? Ahh well, either way, update soon.

Well, Kale seems to be failing quite miserably at keeping Alis away. And I'm rather fascinated by this lightning storm place o.o Maybe that's why his hair's crazy... Oh, and I love Arai'iin more and more! He's just so...I don't know. But I love him. He reminds me of a cat. I bet he's trying to set Kale and Alis up. Or he's just trying to piss Kale off. At this point, I think it could go either way.

Arai'iin is awesome!