Did you post the rest of this else where? are you going to finish it soon? more please

This is really fun so far, could you update it? please

: )

I'm sad this didn't continue. I am like the girl version of Kale it is ridiculous. He's dryer than a desert, and I'm just as parched. Man I wish this was completed D; i wonder if its be worth putting this on alert just in case lol

omg I just fell in love with Kale. no spite in him at all, is there? :)

Please continue this story, it's my favorite. I really want to know what happens next!
...is the story dead (now)?
PLEASE UPDATE!

I love this story, could you update?

So it seems like you're back... is this going to be updated?

I love this story! It's great and I can't wait to read more!

I love your story and hope that you'r going to countinou it at some point

First I saw your summary. 'Eh, looks okay. Maybe I'll enjoy it.' I thought to myself, then I started reading it. 'Dude! I am so addicted! This. IS. AWESOME!' Then I scrolled to the top of the screen where the update notification is. '08-12-09? Whhhhhy?'

You need to update this story pronto honey, its my new crack3

Love. BIN

Please update soon. I really like this story and Kale is my favorite and I am in love with him. I want to see more of Arai'iin and what more Alis is going to do. Kale is hilarious. Sometimes I look at people the same way and wonder how they can be so irredeemably stupid and have such a low comprehension level. It astounds me. Anyway, I encourage you to write more. You updated your profile two years after you last updated this story and promised more updates so you should still be able to update this right now. So, no excuses! Update!

It's what? over 2 years? Come on :( you gave us this amazing story, that is written so wonderfully, and no update. Your killing me, and the people who fav'd this 3 years ago. Did you become a hobo? I would go with "are you dead" but, let's not hope that :) *knock on wood* I love the characters personality, and how they correspond to their environment. Everything is written beautifully, and you entrance us to read more. I think I stumbled into Kale library, and now I'm under the spell of your book. The one thing that made it all more worth reading this slash, was how you incorporated fantasy into this love story. If you can write a good love story, your awesome, put fantasy into it. You have my S.O.U.L. kapeessshh? So I want you to get your thinking cap on and start typing. The only way to break this spell is to continue :) stay awesome, and I hope you get your writing groove on XDDD

Update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I NEED MORE! PLEZ?