Reviews for Sun light, Sun bright
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I like the thought of newness of life, there always being another day. It's slightly too optimistic for my liking, but attractive nonetheless :)

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I like this because the idea is different. The whole sun and rain and tears thing has been done before, but you gave it a nice creative twist.

I also liked your metaphors. They were creative and worked well. The only thing is the phrasing in the last line sounded awkward. Bathing someone new? It's just oddly worded. Other than that nicely done!

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