|Reviews for The Ghost Children|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Very nicely done, the consistent rhyme scheme creates a haunting effect. Good use of repetition.
| girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
i was one&yeah, this was it. probably still is.
ever read "rant" by palahnuik? (sp) give it a go if not.
i was one&yeah, this was it. probably still is-
every ghostkid has felt this way at one point or another.
i loved the first stanza, ridiculously hard.
| lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
It sort of gives you that chill, you know? But I liked it.