Reviews for The Ghost Children
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Very nicely done, the consistent rhyme scheme creates a haunting effect. Good use of repetition.

fleur
girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
i was one&yeah, this was it. probably still is.

ever read "rant" by palahnuik? (sp) give it a go if not.

anyhow, yes.

i was one&yeah, this was it. probably still is-

every ghostkid has felt this way at one point or another.

i loved the first stanza, ridiculously hard.
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
It sort of gives you that chill, you know? But I liked it.