Reviews for Couldn't Stand the Weather |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing it would be Corinne and Rhet together. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() This fic is absolutely wonderful. Its perfect. At first i thought it would be a sappy teenage story but it has the right amount of fluff, drama, and reality in it. This is beautiful. |
![]() ![]() loved this! Thanks! Great writing! Good character development. I'm off to see if you have other stuff to read. :) |
![]() ![]() Hi! This story has been reviewed for the site A Drop of Romeo. Here is your review: Melissa Thinks: Corrine returns home five years after she left her hometown of Portland, her family, and her high school boyfriend to make an acting career for herself in Hollywood. As the summary states, when she's forced to live with her brother in their childhood home, she's also forced to come face to face with her old boyfriend, Liam (now a weatherman with a baby on the way), and his annoying younger brother, Rhett (Cory's least favorite person, now an amazing mechanic and owner of his own shop). I don't like love triangles, so I'm glad this turned out to not be one. Liam, the possible third point of the triangle, is one of the worst characters I've had the privilege of reading about. He's whiny, selfish, annoying, and a manipulative liar. His brother Rhett, however, is pretty amazing. He comes across as being very caring and loyal, not only towards his brother but towards Cory as well. He had flaws that made him likable without being too overpowering to the likability of the character, like we see with Liam. Liam definitely provides a great foil to Rhett's character. "Couldn't Stand the Weather" captures the attention of its audience with a well structured style. The prose, made up of strong description, does an amazing job of showing the author's voice. The POV switches work to the advantage of the author, who is then able to really show us the character development of all three characters. I think the dialogue is funny, especially the Rhett/Cory interactions. You could feel the spark between them and I honestly wondered why Liam was even a choice for her when Rhett was so darn nice and cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I plan to read this soon. I saw you on ADOR site. Congrats :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay happy ending! Rhett and Cory are so sweet together, d'awwwwwwww! IDK how I feel about Liam and Emma...I mean, I guess I feel happy for Jack, lol, but Emma deserves better and Liam...whatever. But I guess they're all grown-up and mature now and he isn't as much of an ass as he used to be so that's nice. Anyway, this was a great story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liam is such an asshole. But I really don't understand why he's even an issue for Rhett and Cory. They're not together anymore, she's completely over him, he's moving on and preparing to be a father - why does it matter if Rhett and Cory are together? I don't get it. Just because Liam USED TO be in love with her? But that doesn't matter anymore, does it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this, especially the ending. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great ending to a great story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect ending! And Liam let go of his douchebaggery! Woot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good, things are finally going into their place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was intense! I still think Liam is a douche though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see a little bit why Liam is upset BUT...he has a baby-mama and if he didn't want a kid he should have used protection. Liam is in this predicament because of his actions and he couldn't really expect that no one else would move on with their lives. I have no sympathy whatsoever for him. PS. John Mayer is a man-whore. That is all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! I don't even know how to respond to that! (But it was good.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, I knew it was going to happen sooner or later. Although, I am still a bit skeptical as to whether or not Liam REALLY loves Emma. |