Hihi~

Ok I do like the hidden feelings poem as I said, but after reading them all I like this one better now! This one is my fav.

You do realize that you only tell me that you post something up when you remember to? XD For FP that is. I kind of find it odd how you're so good at writing poetry. D: Your free style is so good~ X3

The connotation, emotions that a word gives, of frightened and afraid are different. That is why you feel that frightened is stronger than afraid. o It's a great poem~

I really like this, especially the last part. "I am you, your dying inner self."

I totally can relate to this poem. Seriously, it's beautiful.

Great job on this. )

- Yuna

I love it, it's beautiful, and i can totally relate. Definately one of the best i've ever read.

I hope to see you put up some more work.

hm not bad REGRETFUL DREAMS XDD

by the way

whos the "you" in the poem? /

just wondering..

is the person in SLSS? D

I like this. It's different. I especially liked the last few lines. Great job!