Reviews for Inner self
PoptartRaccoon chapter 1 . 12/31/2009

Ok I do like the hidden feelings poem as I said, but after reading them all I like this one better now! This one is my fav.
Chris the Mooshoo chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
You do realize that you only tell me that you post something up when you remember to? XD For FP that is. I kind of find it odd how you're so good at writing poetry. D: Your free style is so good~ X3

The connotation, emotions that a word gives, of frightened and afraid are different. That is why you feel that frightened is stronger than afraid. o It's a great poem~
Vione chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I really like this, especially the last part. "I am you, your dying inner self."

I totally can relate to this poem. Seriously, it's beautiful.

Great job on this. )

- Yuna
Tearlesscrying chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I love it, it's beautiful, and i can totally relate. Definately one of the best i've ever read.

I hope to see you put up some more work.
demon's lulabell chapter 1 . 4/14/2009

by the way

whos the "you" in the poem? /

just wondering..

is the person in SLSS? D
kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I like this. It's different. I especially liked the last few lines. Great job!