|Reviews for reckless revolution|
| vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Firsties, beautiful use of descriptive language. It wasn't unintelligible from all the adjectives, but it sure as hell wasn' bland.
Fabulous use of the italics, underline, and bold. These are often used not very well, but you did it and it felt natural and added to the piece.
Normally I'm not a fan of swearing in poetry, but in this poem, it added a sharp edge that the line needed.
Very, very good! I'm going to have to read more of your work now...