M. This was a really good chapter :) very well written. I'm oober excited to see what's in store next for Quinn and Fern :)

I am very excited for this story. I think it's moving at an even speed. Not slow enough to make it a long novel, but not too fast that you're missing things.

This story is so insightful about death and such, all the realizations, especially with Jane and Henry. I just thought that was beautiful.

Your writing is beautiful. This story is gorgeous.

Oh my god, that was like, the sweetest ever! I know Fern loves him now. Two kids from different worlds, falling desperately in love.

This is such a good story. I know it's a side project, but I really can't understand how you can write three good stories at the same time! I have a hard time just keeping up with one! How do you keep up with all of it? Really, sometime I'd just like to pick your brain on this stuff, I admire your work so much.

Oh, as good as the last chapters. I want to know more about what happened to them when they were alive, I think. Why Quinn was sick, maybe.

Still, really good. :)

K

This is a really unique story :)

I like it.

I'm liking this story, can't wait to see where it goes :)

This is really good. REALLY good. It's an unusual idea, and I like it. Please, tell me you're going to update soon.

Also, the title sounds like it should be a Death Cab For Cutie song. :)

Oh my God... Two chapters and you already have my eyes tearing up. This is absolutely amazing so far and completely original. Keep on writing. This is greta :)

This story is so cool.

I can't wait for more chapters

Amazing start. :]

As always.

Hm, I have a feeling I'm going to absolutely love this story. I love all of your stories, except for Pale Moon. Can't quite get into that fantasy kind of stuff, i get very lost.

I'll have to read the next two chapters tomorrow at school since I don't have time now.

Yay for being the first commenter!