Reviews for Fire and Water, the War Within Me
Dashboard Dusk chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Fire, water... two sides to a coin, no? One of the oldest, most used, and perhaps one of the best comparisons in poetry.

But I digress.

It's an excelent poem, DL. Definately being added as a favorite. It has a lot of detail and wonder. It asks the all-imporatnt question, "Who am I?", and gives the obvious answer, "Me".

Heh, if only things were that simple, hm?

Anyways...

In short, it was a very good poem, and I hope to see as good from you in the future.