huh? :-O

I guessed in the middle of th story, it was just one of the twist That passed trough my head. I was a little bit surprised (and resigned) That you used in the end.

Anyway, on the story. I can't symphatize with the main character. Many would call it a noble couaregous act of devotion but I just find it stupid, maybe I'm just insensible or selfish, but if a person do this to me i would leave them inmediately, they're not worth my or anyone else's. I wouldn't stay with a person on who I can't trust and who can't on me.
All in all, it was still a good story.

I apologize for the any spelling or grammaticals errors.

I did not expect that ending. The writing was extraordinarily well done; this story tells so much in so few words.

Wow! This was expertly written. I did not see the ending coming at all. It was also heartbreaking.

Gosh i'm blown away by the guy's love for the gal. This story is good!

Oh my, what pure devotion and love!

Wasn't expecting that!

He seems so accepting though..even though Lillian doesnt know..how can she laugh so easily :(

I've read similiar storyline twists but you do it really well especially with its simplicity! :)

Holy...I can't believe he would stick by her after what she did, but it's so sweet he did what he did. I don't much like Lillian for what she did, though.

It's a great plot, written amazingly well. Good job.

That's so sad. You wrote it beautifully. He stuck by her side, even though he knew she had been unfaithful. :(

that ending was so heartbreakingly sad and gorgeous. knowing that the child wasn't his the entire time...it's crazy. lillian doesn't deserve someone like him at all.

you wrote it so excellently. i really liked how you turned the "parent's disapproving" story on it's back.

Beautiful

well done! (:

omg! Shock!

WoW

That's an awesome twist. Guys like him are so hard to find. This is going to my favorites :)

Woah! I never expected it! I thought at first that it was just kind of parents-disapproving-the-girl stuff but then it turned out like that... I really like this. How great that man's love for Lilian and she's freaking lucky! hehehe! Great story!

~going to favs~

this is really good,i like hoe Lillian and he love each other even though the baby isn't his.