Reviews for Door Life
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
It's good.

I get the message and what I wanted to say in this poem..

Try adding stuffs like "at" or "of" to some parts. Like Door of Life or something.. and like "just peek AT you" something like that.. I think it would sound better.

but it's fine! like it!

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