|Reviews for Still Bleeding|
| enoughtoloosecontrolescence chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
love the story! I love the description how the narrator feels.
| kelse-a-bells chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
This story is beautiful and I just wanted to comment on the ways that you described some things:
'bled rivers of crimson' - I've always used rivers as a way to describe the flowing of tears but this was a great way to emphasize blood.
'drowning in my aftermath' - Yeah, I've picked the two emo-ish sayings, but they're touching.
I think that too many people don't realize that lesbians and gays are just the same as heterosexuals. They still deal with the same relationship problems and such. I think that they expect that we find one person and that's it.
Anyway, this is amazing. I'm favoriting it.
- Hey Twilight