|Reviews for Worst fears|
| KaylaDawn chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I really liked these few paragraphs. They show so much emotion and decription, yet are in only 5 paragraphs.
| Bleached Kitty chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Ahh, good job my friend. Very touching and got the point across very well.
| vendettalexicon chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
The rush of intense vocabulary is very nice in compensating for the actuality of the emotions in this scene. It starts simple, and ends tragically. I like it. There are a few spelling errors, but other then that, I cannot see any major flaws in this peice.