|Reviews for That place|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
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I didn't like this piece. It's confusing. You start off with an ambiguous place and you never explain it. You switch to a person, which didn't make sense to me.
The italicized part was nice though. Though you switched from someone to you, which seemed a bit odd. Also, in the last stanza I didn't like how you repeated that line. It just didn't seem necessary.
I know you can do better.
| Isca chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
"You're in my heart." There's something so sad, yet beautiful, about this line. :)