Reviews for Companion Chronicles
catgirrl246 chapter 3 . 6/8/2009
Wow. . .

wonder where this is going. . .

Hopefully you'll continue?

Sorry I took so long to review!
Sabrina Zadora chapter 3 . 5/31/2009
these are reaaly great and i think you should continue them but please use spellcheck because some of the words i couldnt understand, but you should really continue it!
catgirrl246 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
'You poor unfortunate souls'? lol.

This story just got good! I'm really into it now cause it's starting to make more sense than the last chapter.

You did change tenses once that I see:

[..."Let us go." HE said...]

but you switch back a little while after that.

Can't wait until you continue!
catgirrl246 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
It makes a little more sense, up here all at once now.

I can't wait to see what happens next.
Jellyhead chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
No offense, but is this some sort of Final Fantasy VII fanfic?
Ganondorf The Dark Knight chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
You changed from first person to third person suddenly. Not an awful thing, considering what was going on, but you may want to indicate a change with a series of dashes or something.

"I pricked me ears, for I recognized that name." Little typo. :]

It was pretty good. Sounds like you could take it to some interesting places.

Update soon? I'll be sure to read.