Hi again from January 2024, still coming here to see if there are some news about an update or some publishing ;) and more important, see if there are some news from you : I hope you are well, happy new year to you D (I even went to your blogspot lol to remember the imagery you chose for your stories)

This fic is old but the South African comment is so tone deaf lol. That place was completely colonized and the black folk there were oppressed for years. So to have your white character boo-hooing about possibly being oppressed is so stupid. Like she would not be oppressed in South Africa. And the implication that black people/Africans are racist toward white people when that's not even the case. Yikes.

Hi D I saw a news today about Jamie Lynn Sigler and I thought about this story ;) hope you are well ?

Terrific story... wish there was more! Thanks!

I haven’t been on fictionpress in years, but was thinking about this story the other day. Is this book now published? Or others? You have a gift and really hope you’re able to complete this story, despite the setbacks of people stealing your work. Take care!

Hi from May 2020, I am still not losing hope for a "next chapter" ;-)
Hope you are well !

What a Womderful story and please continue...

Hi
This morning on the bus i was thinking of this story and got the craving to re-read it again :) so here am I !
I hope one day you will be able to continue it ! ️

I haven't been back to fictionpress for several years and happened to stumble across this story tonight. I love the way you write! I know it's been a long time since you've updated this story, but it's so incredible, it deserves an ending.

Or has this published? I'd very much like to support you! Please let us know!

Okay, I've just finished re-reading it and I'm still very much into this story. When will Olivia find out about Jillian? Will Jillian cause problems for their relationship? What else did she do to hurt Ben?
I have so many questions, but I have to be content witg what my imagination comes up with.

Great job writing this story. Your attention to detail is noteworthy. The tone has remained consistent all throughout. I'm still holding out hope you'd come bakc to this someday (even if i'd enjoy rereading this again and again as is) since your last update was 2014. It's just a few years so you might still come back to it right?

Thanks for writing again! Now I'm off to binge read your other works!

I know this is still unfinished but I have re-read this so manybtimes simply because of how well it was written. I know it's a long shot, but I still hope you update this someday, or write another piece to continue Ben and Olivia's story. Or another story in this world, maybe about toby?

Anyway, I'm truly sorry if those who plagiarized your work has discouraged and hurt you. But you are an amazing and talented writer. I wish you the best!

Such a shame the story was never finished - I’ve always wondered what became of Olivia and Ben.
You’re an amazing writer and I wish you the best! I hope you consider publishing books someday!

Oh sweet merciful lord you can't stop there! Here I've been going on about this being completed because there were so many chapters so not only do I feel like an idiot, but an idiot who is so incredibly hooked on this beautiful story and am BEGGING you to come back to it. I'll do anything. I'll be your stenographer while you dictate. I'll bake cookies. I'll name my next kid after you. PLEASE?!

I'm really glad Olivia took everything in stride instead of freaking out like all the men seem to be doing. Yay for wooing!