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Anonymous chapter 15 . 7/6
Please please please keep writing this story. I know it's been a year and it's a long shot but I just found it and I love it! It's so well written!
ColdWinter12 chapter 22 . 5/27
OMG! I love this story so far and how the relationship between Olivia and Ben. I like how you switch between characters, so they are all so lovable and you care for this group of friends. I'm excited to read more and to eventually read Olivia and Ben's happy ending. Please update soon!
notjustink chapter 22 . 5/21
I started off reading Better Together a few years ago, and found it to be one of the most powerful shorter stories on this site. I love the characters of Olivia and Ben and believe that this story is a great transgression. I hope that you continue to write it, since you totally left us at a cliff-hanger! Keep it up :)
Bandgeekclarinet14 chapter 19 . 3/16
It's been seven months, those Brussels sprouts must be charred at this point.

No saving them.

But seriously though, you leave us with a cliffy like that, they are FINALLY going to pork, and you leave it. No update in seven month. I have been in fangirl limbo for seven months.

Please put a poor girl out of her misery. Please, I beg of you.

Do it for the brussels sprouts.

Haha, but honestly, this is, and has been, one of my favorite FP stories for five years now. It is so original, and the characters are just so well developed, not just the two protagonists, and I love that.

I also love the witty one liners being thrown around. They get me every time.

I also hate it when people try to tell authors what should happen in their story, because I think it's slightly rude, but I can't help but picture a cute little scene of maybe Liv and Ben trying to help Harry get back into the good graces of his wife by planning an "I'm an idiot forgive me" date and them taking the kids for the night, and then we can see them being pseudo parents and playing house and ah, so cute. Of course this is all in my mind. I have to make up these little scenarios since someone *hint hint* hasn't given us any more chapters to read over and over again.

So please, if you have the time, and I pray to the lord almighty that you do, please, please give us an update.

I can't wait to see what you have planned.

Best Wishes,
XXX
Kenz
MileyRowling chapter 22 . 2/19
Nice work! You need to finish this!
Bandgeekclarinet14 chapter 22 . 2/5
Okay, I am literally dying here. You can't just stop a story right when they are about to FRICK FACK, LIKE COME ON.

Ugh.

This story has literally been my little getaway from my stressful life. I have found myself rereading this more times than I can count.

You have such a way with words and the plot line is just too perfect. I love everything. The Characters, the banter, the small gestures.

I need more ASAP.

I really hope you are doing well and have some time to continue writing.

Amazing job as always.
AdultFanFiction chapter 22 . 1/20
Has this story (with some differences) and its last chapter could be considered a resolution. I was dying for more so I searched our illustrious author on line and was delighted to discover that she also published on that site.
KarasunoFan chapter 22 . 1/5
Oh my!
I just found this story today and am so invested I ordered take out rather than stop reading! And much to my dismay I find it ends here :o.
Hope to see Chap 23 ASAP
Great story chapter 5 . 1/5
But I wonder what time period it is set in? When would dyke have been such a vicious insult. For a straight woman to be called a dyke and have it wound her...it strains credulity. And that another woman would so cavalierly use the word, I feel like this must be set in the 80's or something.
Alexa Rg chapter 22 . 1/5
Their Brussels Sprouts might be ice cold by now.
elana1 chapter 22 . 12/7/2014
PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH PLEASE FINISH
Guest chapter 22 . 11/25/2014
Pleaasseee complete this story
Cassadaga chapter 9 . 10/6/2014
The emotional shifts are giving me whiplash! And sometimes I feel like Ben is TOO harsh, like telling Jessie the thought of being with Olivia made him sick. Too far, Ben.

Also, it didn't quite make sense to have Ben translate the horses name to Olivia. Because she wouldn't know the spelling of it and surely, if Ben's saying the name aloud, she would be hearing it the way it's pronounced. The phonetic explanation was there for readers, but it didn't make sense to have it that way.

Also, wasn't this trip happening for the sake of visiting their best friends? And so far they've spent one afternoon with Jamie and violet..? Since Jamie and Vi only live 15 mins outside London, wouldn't it make sense to have the four of them doing touristy stuff when they first arrived? Also violet surely would have let Olivia stay at her house, so Ben never would have had to get her a hotel room.

Of course, this goes against the advancing of the romantic plot

Sheesh this review sounds like a complaint! I promise it's not. This was a very beautiful and pretty chapter. I was just pointing out things that could be refined...I still love it!
Cassadaga chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I really love this! But Ben shouldn't be saying "mom"-British people say "mum" and they consider it to be a sort of patriotic thing. They would never say mom. That's like calling football soccer-it goes against national identity lol

Also it was weird to say that his home is "between Edinburgh and Inverness" because those two cities are pretty far apart. There are other large cities between them like St Andrews, Dundee, Aberdeen. It just wasn't a natural thing to say because Edinburgh and Inverness are ao far apart. (I lived in Edinburgh so that's why I'm commenting on this. I don't expect everyone to know the distances so it's no big deal, but I thought you might like to know :) )

I like the flaws the characters have and the way this is written. At first I thought this was all set in the UK somewhere because of the names and way they spoke. Dunno. But you do a good job of making Brits sound British. And omg is Harry's name Harry Potter? Haha awesome. Also, I did enjoy the different and unexpected POVs, such as Harry's.

My fictionpress name is Cassadaga but I'm on my phone and it's a hassle to sign in. I will leave more reviews as I read on!
Guest chapter 22 . 10/5/2014
They left the stove on! Awesome though. Really nice story.
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