Reviews for Can You Blame Us?
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
you're questioning is remarkable and deep. I'm guessing you're still in high school but when you get to college you should take a class in philosophy, I think you would enjoy that.
DarkRose1593 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Very thought provoking. 100 is alot though!
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Wow that was really good. This verse in particular,

"We are your children, dying and bleeding,

We are blasphemous, crying and needing

A real God."

It captures current views people have of faith perfectly (my own included).

I think we all like to think there is something or someone there but faith has abandoned many people.

The rhymes are great, I also liked how you referred to the creator as a creation, an interesting idea.