Reviews for Nervous, Yet? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was the cutest thing that I've read in months! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! So cwute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one-shot was very well written and absolutely adorable! The sweetness of it made me aww and smile like an idiot, which in my opinion is the perfect reaction. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my freakin' god. That was AMAZING! I loved it! Really, this has to be one of the best one-shots EVER in the history of amazing one-shots! How did you come up with this awesome idea? It seems like such a simple plot idea and everything... but it's also really original at the same time... I actually laughed out loud (in a good way, not an 'I'm-making-fun-of-you-for-writing-that!' way) at the part where Michael confessed that he's liked her since third grade! That's saying something, cuz I have this super weird sense of humor when I read. Anyways, I obviously really liked this one-shot, and I love your writing style and technique! :D Alrighty, well I enjoyed reading this and... yeah. Good one-shot. Haha. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. they just start kissing in front of everybody. instead of making him holler, you should make him moan or something. because isn't she still really close to him? it would have been awkward if he hollered in her ear. it was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very cute, and fluffy, and just a really nice happy dose of cliche. It made me smile. “It’s true, dude,” a basketball jock stated. “I’ve seen the way he looks at you. That’s some true love shit, right there, man.” that line made me laugh so hard because that's exactly how we (teenagers) talk now a days, and that's exactly what some of my friends would say in this situation. Anywho, good job, there were just a few grammar mistakes but nothing too major. Keep on writing :]] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was the cutest story I have ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, that was so cute. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice cute little fluff, really made me happy. thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is so cliche but still so cute i love it and who woulda though a game of nervous yet would bring them together lol love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet and cute :) Approx. how old are they? Awsome story, keepy writing. Gup |
![]() ![]() ![]() tehe! this was so sweet :) really well written! it was a really good read, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Michael's reaction to her saying it doesn't feel wrong...poor guy, waiting that long to tell her! Great story! - Rebekah |
![]() ![]() omg, i have a shit-eating grin on my face that i cant get off. that was the best fluff one-shot ever! great job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah that was really adorable! I love his response to her saying "no, not at all." SO cute! -Aria |