|Reviews for Dreamworld|
| Rainy Day Dreamer chapter 2 . 1/28/2011
Why do you need two prologues?
I mean, I would understand if it were told from two different perspectives, with different information and different voices, but this is just the exact same thing, with "I" instead of "she."
It's an intriguing prologue, and you write rather well, but really, pick either third or first person. Republishing each chapter in both is just distracting, slightly annoying, and really kinda pointless.