Reviews for Rain
Dashboard Dusk chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
"Rain is like a beat

That the world hums along,

Because its heart knows the song

But the words don’t meet."

I think that was the best part of the poem so far, DL. I think it's deep, and it has an interesting rhyme scheme. I'm sure the next poem you write will be just as good.
Dashboard Dusk chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
Heh, I should pay attention to my author alerts once in a while...

It's an interesting series so far, DL. The sudden change from free-verse to a rhyme scheme was a good touch.

I'll be waiting for the next poem/chapter. Hopefully it'll be as good as what you've written so far.