|Reviews for Rain|
| Dashboard Dusk chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
"Rain is like a beat
That the world hums along,
Because its heart knows the song
But the words don’t meet."
I think that was the best part of the poem so far, DL. I think it's deep, and it has an interesting rhyme scheme. I'm sure the next poem you write will be just as good.
| Dashboard Dusk chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
Heh, I should pay attention to my author alerts once in a while...
It's an interesting series so far, DL. The sudden change from free-verse to a rhyme scheme was a good touch.
I'll be waiting for the next poem/chapter. Hopefully it'll be as good as what you've written so far.