oh ..

your poem has an unpredictable ending..

i like ]

LOL it's nice.. I was expecting a rather highschool love at the end.. but I guess this is about a love that had died.. so.. i think it's cool. I was picturing a girl, hiding and stuff and sneaking a look for her crush but, the ending was 'death' so.. I wasn't expecting it. XD

do right more :)