Reviews for Field Strip
Isca chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
"Kerosene, douse me down." Incredibly chilling.

"Wake up, heave." This reminds me of people who suffer from bulemia. Poor souls. :(

"Always, all ways waiting." Excellent word play!

This poem is so avant-garde and unique. Great work.

-Isca
scarlet stars chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
"always all ways

waiting,

split me

into three

so

I could be

religious"

Brilliant. I liked this a lot. You have a wonderful flow, I can tell you put a lot of thought into the placement of your words. I did feel though that "ribs up/down" marred this flow. Perhaps you could word this differently. Overall, stunning imagery.