|Reviews for Hero by Design|
| Alondra chapter 29 . 1/29
I really like your story, but to me it was like she betrayed her love for Jordan in this chapter by getting cozy with, and kissing "some other guy"; I mean same goes for him in a way but maybe he just gave up on Amy after finding out about his dad and her mom? I really like the story though, please don't take it personally, just me and my stupid opinion.
| Tathwem Essenuejal chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
Way to be clueless Megan. Interesting terms of endearment... I'll stick with mon petit chou (a french term of endearment literally translating to, "my little cabbage"). Leonardo, definitely Italian. It's kind of strange, the short hand Leo brings out the force and strength of the football player in him but his full name shows the sophistication of the Italian arts and his work ethic as part of the race of one of the greatest empires the world had ever seen. That's probably too in depth but whatever. He seems to prefer the Leo side of him (I will now differentiate between his qualities as Leo and Leonardo) but there is definitely some Leonardo in that boy. And Tony... Not sure what to think of him yet.
| Tathwem Essenuejal chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
The beginning of your novel writing career. And now I get the significance of the title. I must say, I am now going to be totally addicted to a romance novel all thanks to Ruby Kart. I really should have read it well before. Anyway, I love the character you have going with Amy. A third wheel fashion designer; I dig it. Modesty, filled with humor, brilliant first chapter. You don't reveal too much which works to your advantage at keeping the reader curious. Between her friends and her late father... and admittedly the romance, I expect to be entertained.
| The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper chapter 40 . 10/31/2011
what does Amy mean about 'i wiped a way a few more tears'? I had to get rid of a puddle. :'( I was soo sad
| chynna323 chapter 50 . 8/27/2011
Amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing! I could keep going, but i won't cause i wouldn't have enough characters. I'm extremely happy with the ending... so happy that happy isn't good enough to explain it. Nor it is ecstatic or thrilled or... you get the idea. I have already favorited this story, and plan on reading many more of them. ! (p.s. I am extremely tired so if this sounds crazy, don't blame me, but don't get me wrong I still am in love with the story)
| chynna323 chapter 49 . 8/27/2011
Ack! it is almost over! i have become addicted to this story, and now it is almost gone. (tear tear) Well kudos for keeping me interested this long, and for all the smiles, laughs, giggles, the sniffles, the tears, the amazingly lovable characters and the connections to them. A thousand hugs and cookies to you!
| chynna323 chapter 33 . 8/26/2011
Yay! She isn't dead.
P.s I just noticed that all of my comment sound very crazy with lots of !'s, i'm tired, so I get overly emotional...but the tears were not me over reacting
| chynna323 chapter 32 . 8/26/2011
I am scared to read the next chpt.
What if her mother died?
What if Jordan's dad was in the car? (not highly likely)
What if my what if list goes on forever? (lol)
| chynna323 chapter 29 . 8/26/2011
I am crying now. I am hopeless when it comes to things like this. keep writing, you are truly amazing
| chynna323 chapter 28 . 8/26/2011
Omg I should have said this before, but this would make an amazing movie. Love this story
| chynna323 chapter 19 . 8/26/2011
EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! This story is sssssooooooo awesome.
I am in love with all of your characters.
| Devilish Kisses chapter 3 . 6/6/2011
Smart girl, Brenda! I can't believe she paid for breakfast too!
| The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
yeea.. i noe im reviewing the first chapter. but i only did it to add you and this story to my favourites. ive read it 2 times.I absolutwly love it.
| The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper chapter 14 . 4/28/2011
LOLi love the gay thingy i cracked up! AND ITS MY SECOND TIME READING YOUR STORY!lol i really think max is hot
| Binkybaby chapter 51 . 4/23/2011
I litteraly flipped out when he asked her to be his girlfriend! No joke! LOVED IT!