Reviews for Hero by Design
Princess of Chocolate chapter 51 . 1/3/2010
Hmm, I like your idea of Young Love stories. That sounds interesting.

Just one thing that sort of didn't make sense to me: When Amy gets on the motorcycle with Jordan, there is a lot of contact. They see each other (I think) and they touch each other and he HEARS her voice. But, he doesn't think it's Amy?

That entire part of the chapter was a little confusing. I didn't understand how he couldn't figure out it was Amy, especially after being around him for that long. And then, how he just lets 'the girl' down at the end AFTER agreeing to the competition. It doesn't seem right.

But, it was a good ending. Maybe a bit cliche and a bit confusing, but an ending nonetheless. I would suggest writing a small epilogue to smooth things over. Or just an 'Author-to-Reader' information chapter.

Merest chapter 49 . 1/3/2010
Nice chapter and oh gosh! I really dont think Amy would do that because of all the self-respect she has! But then again...she DOES love Jordan. Oh boy.

Great chapter!
Merest chapter 48 . 1/3/2010
Loved this. So glad Jordan and Amy are friends again.
Merest chapter 47 . 1/3/2010
Yay! I'm so glad they spoke to one another but now where do they stand? Can't wait to find out. Awesome chapter!
Merest chapter 46 . 1/3/2010
Haha. I started laughing when she thought she had a stalker. That was funny. I imagined her expression.

Amazing chapter!
Merest chapter 45 . 1/3/2010
Amy is so winning this competition..
Merest chapter 44 . 1/3/2010
Great chapter!
Merest chapter 43 . 1/3/2010
Great chapter!
Merest chapter 42 . 1/3/2010
Loved this chapter!
Merest chapter 41 . 1/3/2010
Hah. The ending sentence made me think of "Battlefield" by Jordan Sparks. Hah. The irony in that, right? Hah.

Great chapter!
Merest chapter 40 . 1/3/2010
Merest chapter 39 . 1/3/2010
Jordan seems angry haha. Awesome chapter. I was so relieved with what everything that happened.
Merest chapter 38 . 1/3/2010
Loved it! Gotta feeling her mom and Jordan's dad are gonna break things off...
Merest chapter 37 . 1/3/2010
Loved it! But I wish she'd told her bout Jordan..
Merest chapter 36 . 1/3/2010
I just went from prep, skater chic to total emo during that scene in the garage. LOL

My friend was looking at me through the entire 30 second phase. This was really awesome.
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