Hmm, I like your idea of Young Love stories. That sounds interesting.

Just one thing that sort of didn't make sense to me: When Amy gets on the motorcycle with Jordan, there is a lot of contact. They see each other (I think) and they touch each other and he HEARS her voice. But, he doesn't think it's Amy?

That entire part of the chapter was a little confusing. I didn't understand how he couldn't figure out it was Amy, especially after being around him for that long. And then, how he just lets 'the girl' down at the end AFTER agreeing to the competition. It doesn't seem right.

But, it was a good ending. Maybe a bit cliche and a bit confusing, but an ending nonetheless. I would suggest writing a small epilogue to smooth things over. Or just an 'Author-to-Reader' information chapter.

Princess

Nice chapter and oh gosh! I really dont think Amy would do that because of all the self-respect she has! But then again...she DOES love Jordan. Oh boy.

Great chapter!

Loved this. So glad Jordan and Amy are friends again.

Yay! I'm so glad they spoke to one another but now where do they stand? Can't wait to find out. Awesome chapter!

Haha. I started laughing when she thought she had a stalker. That was funny. I imagined her expression.

Amazing chapter!

Amy is so winning this competition..

Great chapter!

Great chapter!

Loved this chapter!

Hah. The ending sentence made me think of "Battlefield" by Jordan Sparks. Hah. The irony in that, right? Hah.

Great chapter!

Beautiful.

Jordan seems angry haha. Awesome chapter. I was so relieved with what everything that happened.

Loved it! Gotta feeling her mom and Jordan's dad are gonna break things off...

Loved it! But I wish she'd told her bout Jordan..

I just went from prep, skater chic to total emo during that scene in the garage. LOL

My friend was looking at me through the entire 30 second phase. This was really awesome.