| Reviews for Hero by Design |
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   greenestar chapter 2 . 5/18/2009 her friends...they seem like jerks! |
| greenestar chapter 1 . 5/18/2009 ahahha! so mean! lol. i like it so far. |
| Midori Ushi Law chapter 2 . 5/2/2009 LOL Your ending was perfect! Even though the secret joke was planned from the last chapter, it paid off really well and left me with a snicker. I thought I heard a duck quack on the last line of this chapter. or a Wamp Wamp Wamp Wawawawawawa... LOL I see a potential love interest! But I also sense a potential break up... Whatever... I'll continue reading this. It's a well written story and I need to read some light an fluffy stories after writing Dark and dreary Greener chapters... GOOD READ! |
| Midori Ushi Law chapter 1 . 5/2/2009 This is a cute, fun, realistic story that you created. It seems like something I could see Lindsey Lohan playing if this ever becomes a movie (That's a compliment. Lindsey Lohan is a great actress and would totally fir your protagonist's role perfectly). I love how she blows off the lottery thing like it's no big dead, which is still realistic since it's been some years. Learned all that I did about the character in this first chapter was calming. She introduced her life to the reader well. There was just one thing that I wondered about... Why doesn't Tony pick up his crazy girlfriend unless he doesn't have a car... No grammar errors... No spelling errors... Not your typical teenage girl that you read about in most FP stories. I love it! You get a whopping 6 out of 5 lolz. |
| abandonedsabubu chapter 1 . 5/1/2009 I admit this isn't my cup of tea, however it's very well written. D I can't be specific, but something about this makes me have to work on my own writing. I really enjoy how the paragraphs aren't lengthy and it's easy to follow, unlike some stories where paragraphs take half a page. 3 |
| Stars.Shining chapter 7 . 4/28/2009 Hey! Good chapter! :) Can't wait to meet the crush next chapter ;P haha. Update soon! |
| Stars.Shining chapter 6 . 4/21/2009 Hey! I finally got around to reading this story too! :) This is great, really interesting! I love Amy's taste! :) Can't wait to read more! P.S I love your avatar! Death Cab for Cutie is a great band, and I love that song! :) |
| MissXLM chapter 6 . 4/20/2009 Definitely a good story - it has a great developing storyline & its not too short, and its full of description! Keep going with it, I can't wait for more! |
| ntw1103 chapter 5 . 4/14/2009 Good chapter, I look forward to seeing where you take it. Leo seems like a nice guy, but I think she could do better, since he doesn't really seem interested. |
| Mikki chapter 5 . 4/13/2009 I really enjoy this story...I tought it would be kinda "good" if her love interest drifted over to Leo. |
| ntw1103 chapter 3 . 4/1/2009 Hey, I've enjoyed reading your story so far. I like how you go from your characters thoughts back to the events that are happening. Good job, keep up the good work. |
| Mikki chapter 3 . 3/31/2009 i like the way this story is coming.I'm on yahoo answersw and you sent me an email telling me about this,i love it.:-) |
| Lissy chapter 1 . 3/30/2009 rlly cool! i saw ur question on yahoo answers, this chapter/ story thingy is wickid good lol |
| Ciara chapter 1 . 3/30/2009 I really like it. It sounds like how I used to be before I switched to homeschooling. |