Reviews for Discard
Merovingian chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Be not quick to wish for a drastic change. At times, the only way to see something different is to stop looking. Do not wish for the past again, love the world as it is. Your reason for being what you make it. The French say, "C'est la vie." (There is a translation in English, but Americans define this differently. These three words have a beautiful meaning, when tried to understand in the tongue from whence they came.)
YouShineBrighter chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I thought this was really well written-

"my only true imaginary friend" i loved the oxymoron within this, it portrayed the confusion and i thought that worked really well.

great work :)
Hehe-Blixie chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
yes it is very dark but i really like it. your poems are very good. i like the only imaginary friend lines. its very interesting

Skye Hegyes chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Poetry is dark. It is the "murmurs of the soul," as my English teacher used to tell me. It is what you really feel when you write it - true emotion caught on paper.
Sarthim chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow...I'm not quite sure what to think about that. Very dark and filled with angst, but enjoyable just the same. It's almost as if your poems leave interpretation to the reader, which in and of itself is a good thing.
AliceofNarnia chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Wow, this is really great! Yes, it is dark, but very VERY powerful. I love the way you portray the concepts, especially the linking of the words "discard, empty, lies, alone" and "death". I love the lines "Though the moment is pending

I have a corner of my mind Left to speak with" They had the most effect on me.

Outsider Looking In chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This poem is really great, I loved it!
HalfBloodPrincess chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
oh i love it. The last stanza was my favourite and also the um lemme see the 3rd and 4th stanza were brilliant. Absolutley amazing. You have now been added to my favourite stories/poems and authors! Congradulations heehee

Absolutly fan-taz-mi-cal! (
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Its dark, but really good, you know? Good work!