Aw.

My.

Gawd.

That was so sad.

Beautifully written. I loved it. Every word seemed so well thought out, and the ending was so sad, so tragic, so horribly brilliant. I really really liked this poem

This is very melodramatic, and I think you meant it to be that way.

I have to say the overall theme reminded me of My Chemical Romance song "MAMMA" where they talk about going to hell. Your verses are not the same as there's, but hte overall theme reminded me of that.

Your protaganist is interesting (I can't think of a better word to dicribe it) Hell seems almost like a mythical place, not a place of damnation. The notion is tossed around like it's no big deal. I enjoyed this, keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

I wasn't sure if I was supposed to sit back and think, or weep after reading this. When I think of it done with a small child's voice, I giggle.

I love the subtle, descriptive phrases! AWESOME!

Just dropping by to say that I love the last three lines about room for one more. Said so casually. Bonus points for creepiness if you imagine it being said in a cute childlike voice.

Oh my god, that scared the crap out of me, not the best way to start my day but it surly work me the hell up. Also if you're depressed and thats the reason why you wrote, find some one to talk to it helps more than you may think.

... (eye twitch) Gosh, ANN! That's really depressing!