|Reviews for The Alliances|
| JP chapter 1 . 2/23
Grammar and sentence structure; I see that you had tried to refrain from using repetitive words however some of the words you used are in the wrong context.
| zombieslayer1998 chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
that was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more like this
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
needs to more of the story
| Jojo chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
didnt really get it
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Not particularly well written. The dialogue sounds like its passing between 60 year old english teachers, but the story seems to point to children? Also, the spelling spoils it a little bit and the characters are a bit silly
| nghn chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
A staggering number of errors, including "undeads" when "undead" is both plural and singular...
But a good fic, nevertheless.
| MacBear chapter 8 . 2/25/2011
First off, you have terrible grammar. Second, plot, logic and characterisation were terrible. Third, if an adolecent girl could beat a zombie, why couldn't a grown man? Really, this story is terrible. There was no background information in the first chapter; where did the zombies come from anyway? Why are people STILL going about their lives when there are MINDLESS FLESH EATING BASTARDS out and about? You really need to improve. Oh, and the fact that your chapters are basically nothing but dialog and movements really doesn't help.
| pooponastick chapter 8 . 2/25/2011
its realy good hmm maby u should make part 2 and also wat kindoff girl nam is carl
| 123 chapter 7 . 2/19/2011
one word ... EPIC
| fdoom3 chapter 7 . 2/5/2011
OMG I love this
| happywheels chapter 5 . 10/7/2010
This story is so great I can look past the bad (terrible, TERRIBLE) grammar. If this is what it takes for you to write, I don't care! I'll keep reading even if you start writing backwards...eh...sdrawkcab. HAHAHAH!
| xXxXfallenxangel chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
That was really really really good! so much suspense though...anyways it's really good.
| Damien Bryson chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
I found... countless grammatical errors within your story plus the description of Quebec city as being a small town.
| eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
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