|Reviews for Breathing Deeply|
| BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Aww! I see the inside story in this and its good. I like it!
| rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
It was so perfect the way you put breathing deeply;
and then another action right after it.
I loved that. :D
And I loved the repeated fallings as well, this poem had a really nice flow but yet still was choppy and had good pauses. Lovely. :)
| Joker4MartialArtsGurl chapter 1 . 3/30/2009