Reviews for An Imperfection
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Pretty. I really like it!

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JGPoetry chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Very nice. Everyone can relate, I would think, and the last two lines really summed it up. Another fave.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
A perfect imperfection! awesome!
kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Bah. This is just so great, I can relate to this too well. I loved the lines, "How weak that smile is. How empty those eyes look." I could just see it. Excellent writing!
Natural and fake beauty chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
wonderful. i love the last two lines. they wrape this poem us beautyfully
chromo freak chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Solid, well-written poem, I really think the last line pulls it together nicely, nice work, I enjoyed it.
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I love this. It's short, it's sad, beautiful imagery, and i just love how much impact you had in it, and how much hurt is running through it. :D Favorite part would have to be the ending, fantastic. :) I loved it!

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Joker4MartialArtsGurl chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
This means a lot to me, well done. Profound