Reviews for An Imperfection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty. I really like it! ~RosePetal~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Everyone can relate, I would think, and the last two lines really summed it up. Another fave. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A perfect imperfection! awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bah. This is just so great, I can relate to this too well. I loved the lines, "How weak that smile is. How empty those eyes look." I could just see it. Excellent writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful. i love the last two lines. they wrape this poem us beautyfully |
![]() ![]() ![]() Solid, well-written poem, I really think the last line pulls it together nicely, nice work, I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. It's short, it's sad, beautiful imagery, and i just love how much impact you had in it, and how much hurt is running through it. :D Favorite part would have to be the ending, fantastic. :) I loved it! Rolliepollie44 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This means a lot to me, well done. Profound |