Awe! I loved it! It wasn't even that cliche, it was adorable! I really liked your characters and how you had them correlate with Beauty and the Beast. Thanks for writing an awesome story! Keep the great work up!

~Pepper

LOVE IT! Keep on writing!

Aw, that was cute...again another great chapter. I liked this story, great job! XD

Ah! I really liked this one! Seriuosl, this is exactly like me and my friend (besides the huge family an long seperations) Although I've never dated anyone, I did talk about a lot of kids in my class to try and get him jealous, but i don't think it worked...Anyway, I really liked this chapter! I don't think I saw any mistakes, and I loved the part with Adam's thoughts. haha, so funny...

I liked it! it was a bit long, but it understanable for a first chapter, you've gotta get things set up and stuff. There were a few mistakes, but nothing too too major. Overall, it made me smile. Good job! XD

That was really adorable! :D

I'm a sucker for a bit of jealousy, misunderstandings and a good old fashioned love triangle _

Keep writing!

Aw, it's so good! Yeah, the story fits completely (although Adam doesn't seem like a beast) but rather one of the most gentleman like characters I have read.

You don't waste time dealing with the looks of the characters but leave that to out imaginations and just give us the important details.

It all fits together so wonderfully, and is full of dramatic irony because we as readers know what the other thinks. You focus a lot of Adam's thoughts and feelings even though it's written in third person.

But we can see that she felt the same way all along. The little episodes about her stiffening and being slightly nervous are like little clues into the mind of Belle.

I really like it. Clearly written and it flows beautifully.

This was amazing! :)

Aww, so cute:) I love it!

it's very good, but could use a lil bit more desription. but other than that keep it up. oh and if you could come rate and review my story,that would be awesome! thanks!