Reviews for Smile, Cherry, Smile
robert blakeley chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
The psycologist in me wants to read all kinds of things into this piece, but I'll just stick to the story. For a short story, its pretty good. The main charachter is definitly dark. I have to admit, there have been times when I felt the same way. I did have to wonder, where is he drinking in public without the cops giving him a hard time? If it wasn't even noon yet, why did she say she likes taking walks in the park at night? I suppose you are just left to wonder, or maybe, like her favorite ice cream flavor, it doesn't really matter. This could be the begining of an even longer story. Right now its a good snap shot of a very depressed person who may have just found their reason to live again.
Kidwiththecap chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I really like cheeries as a symbolic fruit too. I don't usually eat cheeries, but I like the symbolisim. I sorta want to eat a cheery right now. I wish I had the patients to draw a manga... my stupid computer won't let me