Reviews for I Love You, Peanut
Hypa To Hell And Back chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
what do i think of the charactors...?...?...? well, i love carson already, though i am a little confused as to who it who on ht parent side of things. i think i have it down but still a little wavy. my fav so far is... defo carson. i love him already. :P

i think the dialogue/narration is good. there is an equal amount of each and it suits it well.

i will deffo keep reading. i am intrigue to find out how this will end and what happened from this point on.

i think if you fix the explaining on who is who when writing you will be fine. i just got a little confused on that part.

i love it o far so we are good.

Naomi
oxsarahxo chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
i like it :)
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