Reviews for To Love The Enemy
It'sAHorseThing chapter 3 . 1/2/2010
you need to update agian! this is so good!
blacksneakers chapter 3 . 10/16/2009
I love it very much so far!Please release chapter 4 soon!
hpswst101 chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
God thats gotta suck. Update soon.

eaststar chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
Great as always! Every time I reread something of yours, I discover something new!
hpswst101 chapter 2 . 10/7/2009
Well that's on way to steal a kiss. Update soon.

eaststar chapter 2 . 10/7/2009
I see where you are going with rewriting your story. It's beautiful!
Laurice Dairo chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
aw! you restarted the whole thing! too bad; i was really looking forward to it..but i do hope that you'll get to finish it...good luck!
feminista chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
i love your story so far! DON'T CHANGE A THING! you can always shift your focus in the next few chapters or alter your summary to fit your change in storyline.
eaststar chapter 12 . 9/11/2009
I like the idea of her being disguised as a he. I vote he!
hpswst101 chapter 12 . 9/11/2009
Do what makes you feel comfortable. So if you need to re-work it, do so.

Laurice Dairo chapter 12 . 9/11/2009
If that story was without planning, i can't wait for the one that's been carefully thought over! First of all, i really love Anne and also Brent and Janell! Actually, I love all of them!

If i may make a suggestion about Edison and Monique?

Since Anne is such a spirited girl, and never actually listen's to whatever Brent says, you should use that. Since Brent told Anne that she's not allowed to see the prisoners, and Edison is really wounded and got Anne worried, Anne disobeys Brent and goes down and sees how Edison and Monique are doing; with Jason's help.

My thoughts about this scene is really long, but i think that you can manage from there. That is, if you consider my suggestion.

Anyway, best of luck on this story! It would be a shame if you abandon it because it really is a good story! I can't wait for you to finish it!

Good Luck!
Lilexchem chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
I feel if you think that your story can be stronger if you made your changes, then I say go for it. I love the story, and it deserves to be put in the best way possible. So I say go for the changes if you want to.
Daphne.Claire chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
honestly anne needs to remain a he becuz the captain barely respects him as a boy, what luck would he have as a woman. further more she need to create a bond with the crew also before her gender is revealed otherwise they will toss her over board.
Laurice Dairo chapter 11 . 9/10/2009
one of my faves! i just love it! i hope you'll get to finish it! oh please!
hpswst101 chapter 11 . 9/7/2009
There is a lot of drama and secrets on this ship. Update soon.

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