Reviews for Haven's Demise
Angelxoxo13 chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
I wonder what will happen in the next chapter...
Angelxoxo13 chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
Damn! A very good story! I've this theory! People who were killed i.e it wasnt time for them to die but they're forced i.e their soul are force to leave their vessel/body their soul will forever stuck in between, their soul would never crossing to go up there. My dad is a conjuror, he cn call a persn who has died. This was happened last year, he conjured this persn, he said the prsn are not up there, his family got to pray for him, has to give a permission for him to leave. So sad. Imagine a century on earth as will becoming evil. I assure you!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 5 . 1/18/2011
You have no Idea how glad I found your story & read it! Believe it or not I did saw this spirits. It's n0t a joke I'm serious. But of course I wouldnt dare to say 'hi' to them!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
Inhale deeply. Man! That was awesome!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 3 . 1/18/2011
What's exactly happening? That's thought 'swiming' inside my mind like sperms wanting to find egg nearby. Lol just puzzle. A good mind puzzle that make me want to read more and more.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 2 . 1/18/2011
Wow! This is a very good story that has it's purpose. *nothing like a complete no purpose wacko story that I'd been reading before! Tell you It wasting my time!* but this story is feel like real! Great chapter!
Latindancer4ever chapter 29 . 1/17/2011
This was a beautifully written chapter. It reminded me of this movie, The Lovely Bones, which I definitely recommend, by the way. Great job :)
AranaBanana chapter 29 . 1/17/2011

I hate your stupid cliffhangers. There, I said it. Other than that, it was a... rather confusing chapter. And really, it sucks that you broke your laptop. I can understand you going berserk over it.

Anyway, thanks for this chapter!
Rae Kitano chapter 29 . 1/17/2011
Wow that chapter was deep.

Sorry to hear about your computer, bummer.

I'm so wired about the ending.

Again this has to be my favorite story ever.
Whimsical Reader chapter 28 . 1/10/2011
Ah! I can't believe it happened that way! I always thought somehow there would have to be something to help them. You say it's not the end though. I don't know what to think will happen in the next chapter.
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 28 . 1/3/2011
Well, that's depressing.
Kielke chapter 28 . 1/2/2011

i swear i was practically crying at the end of this chapter

now i cant wait for the next chapter; i really wanted david and kristine to be together

awesome story!(:

AranaBanana chapter 28 . 1/2/2011
Hi there!

Another amazing chapter you served us there. And action packed, I like that. Well, I don't like the end. Cliffhangers shouldn't exist. Actually, chapters should never end. Yes, that would be so awesome.

But yeah, I'm looking forward to the next - and lasts - chapters. I wonder how you are going to end this. Thanks for updating so quickly, keep it up!

Oh and best wishes for the new year!
Latindancer4ever chapter 28 . 1/2/2011
Oh. My. God. Well, that was... rough. Why did she die! What's gonna happen next? This was such a sad chapter, the goodbyes got me a little teary-eyed - especially Kristine and David's, naturally. Update soon!
Rae Kitano chapter 28 . 1/2/2011

This chapter was awesome. Kristine died. My sense are still tingling with the fact that she died and I cant even imagine what is going to happen now.

I can't waint for an update. I love this story. It is seriously my absolute favourite.
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