I'm clinging to the edge of my seat.

I love this story.

The excitement at how it will end keeps me eager to read more.

Rae

I am so in love with this story! I love the way it keeps you on the edge of your seat, and how you can feel Khristine's fear. The suspense is killing me though, I really want to know how it ends...

But i have patients lol I will wait, because I know it will be worth it D

I don't know how you can give me the chills in every single chapter! I was reading this in the dark and it definitely made me look behind me more than once. Great work! :)

That was another amazing chapter that had me perched on the edge of my seat. I was so waiting for a skinless demon to jump out of nowhere. And I really liked the passage when Kristine reads the note and learns she is surrounded by demons.

Thanks a lot for this chapter, and I wish you a merry Christmas!

(And I am glad you decided to update this regularly over the next week, makes me happy, it's like another gift.)

ah more kissing! loved it :) hehehe keep writing. Hope u put the next chapter up soon!

This was a REALLY good chapter. You even had my heart racing at one point. Could it be possible that there are humans still hiding in the building? That would definitely put a whole new twist on things. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Hi!

It's getting even more interesting. I couldn't wait for them to reach their goal, and now you had to go and cut the chapter short of finding out. That's just so mean. I guess I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter then. Thank you for this quick update!

:) Awesome, will be waiting for more

Holland's Hell... Well that's just peachy. Thanks for updating! I actually kinda forgot how creepy this story is, it gave me chills! I have no predictions about what's gonna happen next, so I know it's going to be good :)

Hai there!

How dare you leave us hanging? That's such an unsavory way to end the chapter. But I'll forgive you since you wrote that you intend on posting the next chapters soon. Oh a side note, this chapter was as great as the others.

Thank you, and keep up with the good work!

ohmygosh! i loved it! i hope you update son! *pressing subscribe button*

but you should look over your spelling mistakes here and there!

David and Kristine

Ok get the business out of the way first. Read a few errors, they're really noticable so I wont point them out. If you re-read the chapter I think you will see then.

Getting past that. I love this story.

Publish, publish, publish. I dont know how many times I've said that. But do it. And then let me know I'll buy the first copy :)

My excitment is bubbling over a the thought of getting a chapter a week until your story is finished. Dont let me down, even with Christmas just around the corner I have faith in you.

Rae.

Well, I hope it's a good ending! ]If they don't end up together I'll be so mad.

When I started reading this story all I could think was that it was awesome and really messed with my head. I love your characters and I hope nobody dies! :( I have a bad gut feeling though that Dmitri may die protecting one of them as a kind of second chance with what happened with Sam. I was surprised to read that it was all ending so soon but then I realised that it's actually 24 chapters long! It went by so fast! I was wondering if there's any chance of an epilogue? Btw, I've had this really unlikely idea stuck in my head that what if they were all in the same hospital or area and met up after it's all over. :) Keep writing and good luck with those writer blocks!

I have loved this story so far and though there are a few grammar issues you are a very descriptive writer and I feel as if I could actually see what you were writing. Great job and I can't wait to read the conclusion of this story.