Reviews for Haven's Demise
SeaJade Song chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
This story rocks!
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 23 . 9/18/2010
LOVED IT!

but i love every chapter!

this story is freaking amazing.

honestly, get it published.

the only thing was that you had some capitalization issues in this chapter, but i don't care.

anyways, update soon!
Rae Kitano chapter 23 . 9/18/2010
OMG I've been waiting for this chapter for to long.

I love this story - it most certianly has to be my absolute favourite.

Can I quickly mention there were some spelling errors but only minor.

Please dont let me wait to long for the next chapter.

Rae.
DareToSee chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
WOW! Absolutely a great story! i mean amazing! i couldn't stop reading this thing!
CASYlove chapter 13 . 9/9/2010
o what i good story! i love it so much! serioulsy, ever think about getting published?
Ashley chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
so great! i love this story! you should get this published, it is one of the best stories that i have read so far. unlike anything else!
Altschul chapter 22 . 9/4/2010
i just died inside... in a good way. PLEASE write again SON
Lady of Confusion chapter 22 . 8/2/2010
OMG! This story is amazing! I cant wait for the next chapter. I really hope David and Kristine end up together. That would be AWESOME! Update ASAP!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 22 . 8/1/2010
I LOVE IT!

IT'S GREAT!

MORE SOON PLEASE!

HAVE A GREAT WEEK1
RulingtheHearts chapter 22 . 8/1/2010
OMG! i love this story! it is so good you have to get it published!
AranaBanana chapter 22 . 8/1/2010
Hai there!

Sorry to hear about the problems you've had to face to get this story updated, I'm glad you managed to do it. That chapter was really nice, I can't wait to read the next one. And hopefully FP will let you post it without causing any problem.

Also, did you ever say this story was discontinued? Well, good thing I never received the message. You wouldn't want to make me sad would you now?

Hope you keep up the good work. Oh and nice drawings by the way!
Jessie Wulf chapter 22 . 8/1/2010
Oh em gee! I actually like the drawing of the uniforms a lot. You have some great talent there. And I never did get a message. xD

I hope you update soon, I really do love this story.
Rae Kitano chapter 22 . 7/31/2010
OMG! You poor thing. I can imagine you going crazy over this. I know I was.

I love this story. I was jumping with joy when I saw you had posted another chapter and what a great chapter it is. A few errors but who cares I'm just glad the story still goes on.

I've said it once and I'll say it again - This story is worth publishing in print. I mean that. I would buy it.

Looking forward to your next chapter and so much more from your story.

I LOVE IT.

Rae.
amazed chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
wow... what a truly amazing story. I could barely stop to just write this! lol
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 22 . 7/31/2010
AH! OH MY GOSH!

so happy you updated!

this is one of my favorite stories ever.

i really think you could get this published... legit.

i would buy the book. it's awesome.

I LOVE DAVID!

david is my reason for existence.

well not really, but he makes it better.

also, holy shit you are a good artist! i wish i could draw like you!

UPDATE SOON!
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