Reviews for Haven's Demise |
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Kismahaz chapter 30 . 7/29/2012 Where is the epilogue! I want to know how everything ends pretty please! |
The Phoenix Girl chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S AMAZING AND YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER :D |
TNT-Goes-BOOM chapter 1 . 3/25/2011 Woah...just...wow. Really good. Drags you along with it, you know? Frightening to, the suspense is...wow. Just make sure you don't give up on this story! x) |
mailey chapter 30 . 3/9/2011 is there gonna be a sequel to this? |
MuseofMagic chapter 1 . 2/26/2011 Gr. It kept giving me the 'you've already reviewed this chapter' message from chapter 30 all the way back to chapter 15! That's half the damn story. Anyway, you need to add in the epilogue chapter asap. It's nearly 4 am right now and I was supposed to be sleeping hours ago because I have to get up soon, but of course, no, I had to finish reading your updates because I was horribly behind thanks to uni. If I don't get to read a fabulous 'and she met up with David back in life and they lived happily ever after' or something similarly reasonable and understandable and HAPPY I might just have to succumb to depression and by god, start doing homework. Save me that fate and give me an inspiring ending to make me want to procrastinate more XD At least I'm in the mood to write now. Too bad I'm about to pass out from exhaustion. Anyway, good updates though I noted several places I had to reread sentences, but maybe that was my brain malfunction rather than problems with the sentences. Keep writing, update soon please! ~ Caiti |
Jessie Wulf chapter 30 . 2/22/2011 Oh my Gawd. ;_; That was sad. Really, really sad, but I didn't cry.. I don't know why, but since you take so long to update(though it's not your fault, I know), I tend to forget about the storyline and what not and have to go back and review the last chapter. Also, I have a question, why do you have the "Το πραγματικό νόημα του Διαφωτισμού είναι να βλέμμα με un με αχνά γράμματα στα μάτια σε όλες σκοτάδι. Γιατί είναι κατά τη διάρκεια μας πιο σκοτεινές στιγμές που θα πρέπει να επικεντρωθούμε να δει το φως." text in the beginning of each chapter? And what does it say? |
vaniittyy222 chapter 30 . 2/16/2011 It seems that she was able to save everyone in one sense or another but I'm confused as to what she figured out that she knew she could save them. And what the actual flip did? Did she pull them with her? The reason I ask that is because you wrote about her taking on there demonism. That part confused me because I'm trying to figure out how she knew she could do that. The gates chapter really didn't set the scene for a eureka moment for me |
Latindancer4ever chapter 30 . 2/14/2011 This chapter was so... bittersweet. I didn't know whether I should be crying or smiling. Ah! Please don't let David die! I really will cry for sure if he does. Update asap! :) |
artmagus chapter 3 . 2/14/2011 i got so into it that i forgot to review for ch 2 ! it's pretty good and has a lot of suspense! |
artmagus chapter 1 . 2/14/2011 wow really dramatic! very nice! |
AranaBanana chapter 30 . 2/14/2011 Hello! I wonder how you will end this story. I mean, it's gotten a bit confusing in the last 2 chapters. I hope they will have a happy ending. Thanks for the quick updates. ] |
Rae Kitano chapter 30 . 2/14/2011 Again and again and again. I find myself repeating what I've already said. PUBLISH. This story is awesome. I love this chapter. I had tears in my eyes. I so want a happy ending but so much has happened that no matter what happens in the end this has to be the best story I've ever read. |
RulingtheHearts chapter 24 . 1/23/2011 UM WHAT! how can it all come to an end just like that? oh but i love this story so much. please dont disapoint me! |
RulingtheHearts chapter 23 . 1/23/2011 How! how can you get writers block? i loved this chapter! keep up with the updates please! |
Andreussita chapter 29 . 1/22/2011 I really like your story, it's original and the romance it's not that cheesy like other ones, and I love the characters as well I think you can feel very identified with them, I'm a bit sad that is coming to an end, and I hope to read more of our stories after this one. :D Greetings! |