Reviews for Haven's Demise |
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Cotton Candy Suitor chapter 29 . 1/20/2011 This is one of the best stories that I have read. :D hands downs. |
penn chapter 29 . 1/19/2011 will there be a sequel to this? |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 29 . 1/19/2011 Oh yeah before I forget what language is that? Something alien at the very beginning of every chapter. I want to ask that since the first time I read your story. What's that thing meant? Well! I'm curious! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 29 . 1/19/2011 This IS real suck! I just assume that she managed save all those poor souls hence the title 'Heaven'. But to tell you the truth when I read your synopsis and your story they are not match. Wtf? I didnt see the same of synopsis w the story. That kind of that synopsis is match for vampire kind of story or even Werewolves. I didnt see David as a predator n0r Kristine as prey. It's way far from the synopsis. Update soon! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 28 . 1/19/2011 She DIED! Tension! :'( |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 27 . 1/19/2011 FRUSTRATED! That's how I feel right now! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 26 . 1/19/2011 Inhale deeply. Come on! Urgh! Any clue she will cross over to the land of humanity? |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 25 . 1/19/2011 I really wish she get out of this hell pit! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011 Dum di dum. Suprise suprise! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 23 . 1/19/2011 Damn! Drama after drama! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 22 . 1/19/2011 Finally! Took time you go to the Short Stuff! Lol. Just kidding. |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 21 . 1/18/2011 Eeps! My nose keep sneezing and itchy! Btw my heart beating out loud! Hmm why I remembering 'Hold against me' or something by Britney Spears! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 20 . 1/18/2011 I almost believe that she already woke up from her coma. Almost! |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 19 . 1/18/2011 David pov...so that we cn understand how he feel bout Kristine. Well done, well put. Sometimes there are times the reader need this. |
Angelxoxo13 chapter 18 . 1/18/2011 There're few stories over FP that I really,really want it to be film making, you know make it 'real'...this story is one of it. I really wish you hand this to one of the film producer at Hollywood! W today technology...we cn makes this things as real as we want them! Damn! I really want the film version of this story! |