Reviews for Haven's Demise
Cotton Candy Suitor chapter 29 . 1/20/2011
This is one of the best stories that I have read. :D hands downs.
penn chapter 29 . 1/19/2011
will there be a sequel to this?
Angelxoxo13 chapter 29 . 1/19/2011
Oh yeah before I forget what language is that? Something alien at the very beginning of every chapter. I want to ask that since the first time I read your story. What's that thing meant? Well! I'm curious!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 29 . 1/19/2011
This IS real suck! I just assume that she managed save all those poor souls hence the title 'Heaven'. But to tell you the truth when I read your synopsis and your story they are not match. Wtf? I didnt see the same of synopsis w the story. That kind of that synopsis is match for vampire kind of story or even Werewolves. I didnt see David as a predator n0r Kristine as prey. It's way far from the synopsis. Update soon!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 28 . 1/19/2011
She DIED! Tension! :'(
Angelxoxo13 chapter 27 . 1/19/2011
FRUSTRATED! That's how I feel right now!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 26 . 1/19/2011
Inhale deeply. Come on! Urgh! Any clue she will cross over to the land of humanity?
Angelxoxo13 chapter 25 . 1/19/2011
I really wish she get out of this hell pit!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
Dum di dum. Suprise suprise!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 23 . 1/19/2011
Damn! Drama after drama!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 22 . 1/19/2011
Finally! Took time you go to the Short Stuff! Lol. Just kidding.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 21 . 1/18/2011
Eeps! My nose keep sneezing and itchy! Btw my heart beating out loud! Hmm why I remembering 'Hold against me' or something by Britney Spears!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 20 . 1/18/2011
I almost believe that she already woke up from her coma. Almost!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 19 . 1/18/2011
David pov...so that we cn understand how he feel bout Kristine. Well done, well put. Sometimes there are times the reader need this.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 18 . 1/18/2011
There're few stories over FP that I really,really want it to be film making, you know make it 'real'...this story is one of it. I really wish you hand this to one of the film producer at Hollywood! W today technology...we cn makes this things as real as we want them! Damn! I really want the film version of this story!
390 | « Prev Page 1 .. 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 19 .. Last Next »