Reviews for White Flag I |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yay good story :) im glad she dumped james. i dont know why but he gave me the creeps. yay for jake! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is really good. I hate to admit it, but I cried at the end of the last chapter too. I would love to read the sequel, especially if it's in Lily's POV. |
![]() ![]() omfg! how could you do that? Jake would be devastate if he found out. after all that poor thing been through. I always knew something was wrong with James.. - keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() But dude..! Wait, I'll PM you, I don't want to spoil this for others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... i m sad that lily is not jake's child. he love her so much... i wan jake n emma to be together |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT CHAPTER! When I started to get close to the end of this chapter I was like: HOLY CRAP! Then everything was ok and I was like YES! So all in all another GREAT chapter! - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! OMG don't let ANYTHING happen between James and her! That would be like asking to DIE! So please, for me as a good reader and reviewer, DON'T DO IT! Thanks! - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Tis cool. :) There is trouble in paradise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so much fun to read. You definitely need to keep going with it. I really, really want to know what happens with Emma and James now that they've met each other again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going, you're doing great, can't wait til you update |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY! I thought it was over! I think you should continue. That is so WEIRD she bumped into James! I do think you should continue with this storie, but make sure you leave time to write the sequel afterwards! - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should write a sequel in Lilly's POV when she's about 17, just like her mom! I can't believe it's over either! I loved it! I can't wait to see if there's going to be a sequel! For the last time - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok first off WAY WEIRD! Second AW he asked her to marry him and she sadi YES! OMG! I think your my hero right now. - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! THEIR TOGETHER! I have no time to type! I must go read the next chapter! - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Loved it! I wonder if they will get together now. - RoseBriar |