| Reviews for White Flag I |
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   RoseBriar32192 chapter 11 . 6/2/2009 Ok good. She got her mind set right. It was stupid thing to do what she did with James. I started not to like him that much after a while. He just acted like he was hiding something REALLY big from Em. I think Jake and her would make a better couple now that I think about it. - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 10 . 6/2/2009 Well this was an...interesting chapter. I didn't like it as much as the other ones. I felt TOO much happened, and I didn't think that what happened would ever happen. Anyway it was ok I guess, but may I make a suggestion? If you want to keep your book like this you might want to concider rating it M. - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 9 . 6/2/2009 YAY! She's bringing Jake back to life! I hope she and James are going to be ok though. - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 8 . 6/2/2009 Oh, my, GOSH! I can't believe this chapter! I sort of hate you right now but I know things will probably get better. - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 7 . 6/2/2009 DARN! Why do you have to make these chapters so cute and AWESOME! Once again I loved it! - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 6 . 6/2/2009 EEK! YAY! I hope they become a couple soon! I can't wait to read the rest of the storie! They would make SUCH a cute couple! - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 5 . 6/2/2009 Geez! You made my heat skip a few beats like 3 times! The kiss was so ADORABLE! Loved it! - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 4 . 6/2/2009 OMG! HE KISSED HER! EEKK! SO EXCITING! Loved it! - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 3 . 6/2/2009 OMG! I hate it when I think aloud. That SUCKS! Loved this chapter. - RoseBriar |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009 Oh, my, gosh. Is a guy really doing this to her? I think it would SUCK if I started to loose my best friend over a GUY. - RoseBriar (P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on TOTALLY AWESOME books.) |
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009 I loved this first chapter. I wonder what might happen between James and Emma. - RoseBriar32192 |
| Chloeee chapter 15 . 5/2/2009 I love this story! You definitely should do a Sequel in Lily's POV! Would be so great! :D Good work on finishing the story from Chloe |
| EyesFullOfWonder chapter 15 . 5/2/2009 I think it's a good idea... This has been a great story! I found it in the archives, and it looked like a good read. It totally was/is. Terrific job, and very believable! EyesFullofWonder |
| anita darling chapter 15 . 5/1/2009 Oh, just to note, I'm pretty sure that your baby belly doesn't, like, deflate as soon as your baby is out. Because your skin can't just un-stretch back into place as soon as the baby is gone. It'd be a massive flap of skin if that happened, your skin has to stretch back slowly. |
| Wanna-Be-Mrs.EdwardCullen chapter 15 . 5/1/2009 Sorry, I was too lazy to login but you should totally write a sequel, can't wait! |