|Reviews for Wanted|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I really liked this. A slight typo: "catchs" should be "catches".
| The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This poem was wonderful-I especially loved the first few stanzas. It was interesting to see how torn the subject of this poem was between wanting to feel lost and consumed by this person and wanting to find their independence and be rid of them.
"I want to be the prince who wakes me up
from your kisses and tales.
I want to be the sun that stops shining
from your shadow and fear."
Those two stanzas were my personal favorites. :)
| Dreaming Heavens chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Usually repitition is done horribly wrong...not in your case. You know what you're doing and great use of analogies. I really liked this.
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
"I want to be the tomorrow you'll never meet."
I loved that line, and I liked the theme throughout the poem. The last line was also pretty good, this was definitely one of my favorite poems. D
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
"I want to be the flower that dies slowly from your soul." I find it interesting that something as sacred as a soul would 'kill' a flower. It's stunning imagery, though!
Nice diction: "Troubadour."