Reviews for Something In The Summer Air
crazydaisyyy chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
I love this so far! please update soon :-)
naomi chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Update updtae update please 3
Lex chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
Ok you cant leave it there! it doesnt matter how long you haven't updated you cant leave this story!
TO-OLazyToLogin chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
I REALLY dislike Daphney. For some reason, I just can't stand her.
Robin chapter 4 . 7/19/2012
This is actually a really good story. I like it better than "we've got a big mess on our hands."
I hope you don't ditch this and forget about it. It has a lot of potential and it gets more interesting with each chapter. Usually stories drag on and get stale as it moves forward but this story is the opposite.
Also, your latest chapter flows nicely, almost as if you haven't taken a three year hiatus. Anyways keep up the good work! And I hope you have a nice fresh start in creative writing haha. It's like you haven't been gone at all.
sallusocialites chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
Update, would you? :(
bleachedsnow chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
I've actually finished reading We've Got a Big Mess on Our Hands for quite awhile now. I never got around to reading the sequel until now when I decided to give myself a refresher and reread your other story. So far, I'm really loving this sequel with Jack, though Daphne is not my favorite character as of yet. I'm really hoping that you update soon because you've left us in quite a cliff-hanger.
ClaryLovesYouXD chapter 4 . 4/30/2012
Love this yo! Nowm..wen youz gonnaz updatez..foshizzle?...okay...I just wanted to try the Jack voice...heehee...Update soon...yo...
Preposterous chapter 2 . 4/6/2012
Please update this story!
Zohorat chapter 4 . 1/28/2012
Felix is such a Disco Stu! Those four chapters cheered me up during my 'Women's Time'. So thanks a bucket!

Can't wait for more!
LSP chapter 4 . 1/25/2012
I am so happy you're back!

When jayden entered the store was a total shocker! But then i realized that jack was j-diddy!
Preposterous chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
This is one of the best stories I've read! Ever! Please update soon. I need more witty one-liners in my life.
MissColly chapter 4 . 1/9/2012
I liked this chapter, its really made me laugh in some parts. The ending was really good, i cant wait for the next update, i hope yu update soon. I found the part when she's talking to the old lady a bit wierd, it made daphne seem like a tota nutter and i don't think she is. Plus she supposed to be closed up so i didnt understand why she will start talking to someone random when they didn't talk to her first. Overall the chater was great, i hope you dont mind small criticism.
MissColly chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I am so glad that you wrote this story coz it is really good. I wish i had read yur previous story but i cant coz i hate reading books in the wrong order. I dnt have time to read chap 4 now but i promise ill get onto it. Im not very good with reviews sorry, but i had to review this.
MissColly chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Hey i enjoyed reading this chapter of the story and am sure to read more. I like the personality of the guy at the store, sorry i forgot his name. I think its better that you didnt say much about his character becoz it makes him a bit misterious. His tattoo is such a cool idea, where did you get it from?
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