Reviews for Piece of Cake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! OMG. WHY? That's, not right Cody is supposed to understand |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! That was so crazy! you're a really good author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet and touching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I'm so sad it's over! Every character is so cute in their own way. I'm gonna miss them. Your writing style flows so nicely and describes everything so well. I often found myself smiling as I was reading all the cute stuff that happened. Definitely checking out your other stories! |
![]() ![]() i... i just want to tell you how much i REALLY LOVE JONAS...OMG HE's SOOOOO CUTE. every time i read about jonas my mouth will "awww you're so cute" |
![]() ![]() I use TRESemmé, it makes meh look good |
![]() ![]() Sweet as cake! Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another well written chapter, even though Oliver deserves a slow painful punishment. People who enjoy inflicting pain on other people, bdsm aside, are not well. People who deliberately interfere in other people's relationships definitely need to be take care of. Only good writing of these characters could get me so involved, and ANGRY. (Yes, I may have a few anger management issues lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The confrontation was written very well, it felt very real, and I should know. Some people deserve second chances but not everyone. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super funny, cute and adorable even, I love Seth. Jonas should get his number so he can get advice without the audience, yes I realize that this has been written a long time ago, just sayin'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww your guys are all so cute! |
![]() ![]() Woh! Who could have known that our characters would have such issues. Parental abandonment and foster care can really scar someone. Thankfully love can heal. A mother's love can make her realize how horrible her actions were, and I really enjoy the lenghts to which Jane is willing to go to create a real relationship with her son at last. I hope it is not to late for Dean as well, because his grief is genuine. Your characters are really enjoyable, it is quite easy to relate to them. I especially enjoy Mitchell's effort to mend Taylor's self esteem. Way to go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work as usual :) |
![]() ![]() This may be the pms' doing, but I teared up a bit from the endings of Cody and Jonas' story as well as Mitchell an Taylor's (whose story I wasn't as big a fan of as CJ). God, I can't believe it's done. It's one of those stories where you wish it would last forever, and that maybe the characters would just come to life. I don't think I can read another story for a bit, cause I'm still living in this one. I'm so happy-sad it's quite embarrassing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it. |