Reviews for My Story
Edraith chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I like this, all the descriptions and then especially the way it opens out towards the end, widens the perspective from "I" to "he", thus shedding light on the speaker's dreams. In a way a very vulnerable poem, which I appreciate.
Stuffblah chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Wow. Your words sound so... pure! It's amazing! :)

Great job!
Written chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
wow! it's very sweet, but somehow, it's not cheesy. and with these few words, you say a lot more. nice work :)
sifer chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I really love this, it captivates everything about you so well. I think you've just inspired me yet again Marina.._

- Y
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
That's interesting. I like partly cloudy days. Maybe someday the right guy will come along and you have the answer to your question. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott
lookingwest chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
great poem, it generated a lot of emotion and images. it said a lot without sounding forced!