Hi!I dnt know how 2 actually message u,so I'm reviewing!Anyway,I'll try my best 2 read ur book,but I had total dominance of the computer 4 the past 3 days,so my family is busy getting they'e share.I'm the library right now so i can use the computer!Anyway thnx 4 replying!I saw the pro-life thing on ur page,i'm pro-life 2,do u mind if I copy it onto my page?NEway i cant wait 2 read Summerdale high!Ciao!

I hope I can b ur frend

So u might a well know my name!

~Julie

just so you know alex said "jut watch me"I think either sumthins wrong w/ daphny or she was just bor princess!u get my point!

Vamps from .Doesn't Daphney drink blood?After all she IS a far I'm enjoying this alot!Thnx!

who the heck is Spira?I'm kinda !

whoa!a vamp huh/I guess this is starting 2 go supernatural on me!gud book!i luv thius book!

I am soo glad that your keeping it moral.I mean in most stories on here they skip right to them makin out and all that and that is so annoying!Thnx!

pretty good story!Fantasy rox!But I'm also a big fan of the supernaturalThnx 4 the story!

Excellent. It confuse me, but it's pretty good.

First of all, let me say your storyline is badly cliched. Magical schools? A human mixing with magical students? I'm sure that if you say you "love to write" so much, you could think of a plotline that was vaguely original.

Second, I don't know why you found the need to bold out the whole thing. It's a major turnoff to potential readers. And so is putting the same author note at the beginning of every chapter.

Third, the way you introduce your characters is odd. they feel "inserted" into the story rather than "woven" in. And your narration style is also something to be desired. I see a lot of "telling" rather than actual narrating.

What I did like, however, was the idea talking lockers, and having your resident mermaid having a myriad of bottled water in her backpack. It is these little details here and there that really support your story. However in order to really, truly have a good story, you need more than just details. And I'm sure that if you say you really love to write you can greatly improve in the future.

~Sone, from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)

This story is so good I didn't do my homework. It is really great, although the spelling and grammar could be better. and near the start you say a girl is a year 11, but the school goes year 1, year 2... etc. and only goes until students reach 18 meaning there would be no year 11.

Also, I found it kind of obvious where Cassi was, and the thing with Brie was also obvious when Daphne got the letter.

But other than that this story is so... totally awesome.

AMAZING! FANTASTIC! BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! GREAT! COOL! SUPERB!

Now, I've ran out of words.

Any suggestions? Lol.

I'm going to start reading Summer Dale High right now (well, when I've posted this, that is).

I would also like to add that you are a very talented writer.

Sam (tomboy-4-life-911)

This is THE BEST story I've read EVER! Keep on writing!

OMG! you use eat you up by boa! I LOVE that song :) Big fan of her

where did u get the water guns from? was it just like lyin there? cuz thats confusin me... and quite random... lmfao i REALLY wanna use up AL the characters like REALLY badly... Maybe next time :P just wait

AH! IM GONNA MURDER U! Y THE HELL WOULD U MAKE ME SAY SOMETHING SO DAMN CHESSY! Power of the Stars,

Over the lazy

Let your age return,

to when you were a baby.

Take away that magic,

take away the powers.

so that you become a human

innocent as flowers.

? WTH IS UR PROB? HUH? MENTAL MUCH! OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT IS SO DAMN CHESSY! LIKE WAT WERE U THINKIN?